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A Painful Journey

by cj592 @ 2006-05-10 - 19:08:03

A poem by CJ

A Painful Journey
By CJ
Beware the Child of Yore
Beyond the Red Mill Door
Where once the charms of rage
Could nestle in the page
And hang the latter smile
To sit and wait a while
For tomorrow shall bemoan
The brood arranged in stone
And cannot live to goad
The way, a painful road
May harm and witness still
This time, to end it's will

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[Visitor]

10/05/06 @ 20:08

That sounds good. You know, when you enjoy speaking some poems? x

cj592cj592 pro
10/05/06 @ 20:19

Did you really like it? Does it sound better spoken then?

[Visitor]

10/05/06 @ 20:25

It does. A proper professional poem what lives in a book ;)

[Visitor]

10/05/06 @ 20:26

the wink was about my grammer.

I mean it about the poem

:roll: yes, yes, very insecure and unsure tonight :roll:

cj592cj592 pro
10/05/06 @ 20:28

No Need to be insecure- epsecially on this blog. We are all friends here. Like My Grandma is any better. :))

cj592cj592 pro
10/05/06 @ 20:30

Wow! The sort of poem that English Teachers will spend hours disecting and finding hidden meanings in? brilliant! :D

MarikaSunSeekerMarikaSunSeeker [Member]
11/05/06 @ 22:35

Don't know about the English teachers, but I think you've hidden the meaning quite well - does it have a particular one, or is that open to the critic's interpretation?

cj592cj592 pro
11/05/06 @ 22:36

Yes

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